All Comments on 'Finding Daddy Ch. 01'

Holy Shit! This made me so wet! Please continue it!

I've read a few of your daddy tales and find them very hot. Can't wait for Ch.2.

SO PERFECT. Fuck. I loved every word of this! Absolutely perfect! I need more! Please make a chapter two!

Oh sweet screamer I loved your story! You write just like how I like to write. Building up the tension as you feel it between your legs. It was so exciting!

Well done darling.

LadySugar (on Literotica) xxx

Please, please continue this story! Amazing. Thank you

Exactly what I'm talking about SS!! You got me burning with desire!! I hope you come back to us soon!!

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"Hello, Mark. Would you like to come in?" I asked politely, opening the door wider.

"No thank you, Lucy. Please, come with me," He was crisp and polite, like he had been on the phone this morning.

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I apologize, it was rhetorical, you have to meet the parents, be photographed, finger-printed, cheek swabbed and hair follicle taken, and of course the voice recording. While dad is doing that mom will get copies of your I.D.'s, run a credit check, state, federal and interpol background check, and figure out what kind of coffee you drink, naturally!

Red wine chilling in ice?? Author shouldn't write about about stuff he/she knows naught about. Reasonably hot otherwise.