All Comments on 'Finding Erin'

Very nicely written. It's good to see some depth and reality here on lit. You made me take pause and think...

"Digby"

A truly touching story. I loved it.

Beautifully written.

I have been accused of being more experienced and knowledgeable about sex & Life than my now 20 yrs would indicate. 1st of all allow me to justify that wisdom. I 1st became a horny, sex addict, tease at the early age of 11 y o. Not realizing my vulnerability I also became the target for rape. I felt the rape turned me into a woman @ the age of 11 regardless of what the Supreme Court says. I felt no restraints regarding pornography, masturbation, or becuming more of a cock tease. English was my best subject, altho I was never an "A" student in anything butt sports. I am now going to college. Now having just turned 20, I am no longer a teenager anymore also.

I have enjoyed reading Literotica for yrs & yrs (I am looking forward to writing for literotica when I get a chance). When I 1st started reading Literotica it was nothing butt cheap, pornographic, dirty, repetitive descriptions of cock sucking & fucking ass holes. - - Nell has crossed the line - - She has turned Pornography & Literotica into Classical Literature!

Love & Kisses to all of my Friends,

Betty18

Be Naughty

Will you be doing any following up on this story?

This story is wildly successful in two ways.

Your writing style flows well, and is technically superior. I love the way you utilize many different literary devices (a rare jewel on this site). The image of a mermaid was absolutely enchanting. Clearly, you have a gift for holding someone’s attention, not because of salacious material, but due to your command of the written word.

Further, the subject matter was also notable. Erin’s story serves as a great vehicle to reveal your own natural curiosity and fascination with certain aspects of sexuality.

I can’t imagine anyone read this story without thinking back to their own first experience. Peeling back the layers, as you did with Erin, is a great exercise in self-discovery.

S

wonderful...superb writing, well beyond lit entries. reread it, and found new gems. very grateful old guy.