by earlbrowder
100% loved it totally BUT where is the ending??? Please don't leave us hanging... BillyF
What a situation and such a pleasant conclusion.
You are a very fine writer...... keep us all excited..... and keep writing!
So much low grade stuff being posted. Seriously. Doesn't it matter to you how good a story is, how well written it is? This feels like you wrote it in 30mins with one hand on your cock. Doesn't it bother you that your older woman (aka grandma) had zero contact with the grandson, yet is emotionally distraught as if there was emotion before, which there wasn't, because, she never saw this kid? No? Then by all means, continue uploading your shit. Drivel.
I second the earlier comment about the story being steamy.
Good amount of detail; I hate stories that describe exactly what characters looks like or exactly how something happened. Much better to leave room for imagination.
A well written loving story. It brings out the reality of life. A long lost Grandmother and a young lad fancying an older woman. There was a mutual attraction maybe because there was a family resemblance but they were innocent.
As I said a well written story, you never used foul language to access or debased any female you wrote about.
You must have based the story experience.
I had a loving incestuous relationship for years, nobody hurt, full of warmth and love.
Long time since you put 'pen to paper', keep writing.
REgards