All Comments on 'Finding Home Ch. 01'

by Xantu

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Invisible2uInvisible2uover 16 years ago
Very Interesting...

I'm intrigued as to the reasons she has trouble climaxing and how she came to learn to zone out when sensations come. It will be a great read to find out how she progresses and if her Master will be pleased with the changes, if any. Well Done!

jackofthedawnjackofthedawnover 16 years ago
Nice beginning

Nice start. I like the pacing. I like the tantalizing hints of secrets to be revealed.

notmichellenotmichelleabout 13 years ago

Such lovely writing. I am happy I found this story with so many chapters already posted, now I have plenty to read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

Her pain and numbness are both so......painful. I so hope her master has sent her there out of true concern for her, not just maintainence of his toy.

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