All Comments on 'Finding Love'

soon please!

Omg I love it!! Please don't make me wait to read the next one!

a hellion warrior, one who is feared. i do hope ivy calms him( some) hope to see more soon

AWESOME!

5 stars. great story. I really loved the twist in the end that it's the Wolfland pack. But hell, shouldn't she have run to him? Anything would be better than Zan and her father. I hope he can get her mom out of that home too. You did a great job of making Dolmas a horrific person/wolf. Can't wait for more.

Where did you pull this fantastic story from because make sure you go back and get us more!!!! This Daylon character has to be one of the most sexy alpha males. Defiantly need lots more of him soon.

You hooked me from the first moment i started reading and i just so love Daylon and please don't change him one lil bit!! i can't wait to read more!!!

Donna

this is just a fabulous start. can hardly wait to read more!

Wow this story pulled me in straight from the start, please keep up the great work, can't wait for the next chapter!

Wonderful writing, entrapped me right from the start. Please keep this going!!

That is a very explosive beginning.... can't wait to read the next chapter!

Great first chapter can't wait for more.

This was a very exciting and sexy first chapter! I'm hooked! Looking forward to the next! Hope you're a fast writer lol.

MORE!!! Good start.

Great beginning please please continue

Great beginning...definitely want to read more.

nice start to a great story....continue on writing. want to read more

more!!!!!

Hate to be demanding but please update as soon as possible. This is delicious!

K.

I loved this...please continue and update soon

That was the best start to a were story I have seen on here yet. Please Please update as soon as possible and keep it coming.

It's not often that a new author and story on Literotica is such a beautiful piece of work!

Keep it up because it's absolutely stunning to see!

I'm dying in anticipation!!

I was shocked to see you did not have any other submitted stories - your work is fantastic, well-written and hot! Please post another chapter soon!! You are definitely one of my favorite authors!

UPDATE NOW! Am sorry for being so abrasive but this is very good and I would appreciate it if you were to update as soon as possible, thank you.

as soon as possible= NOW!

much love <3

Man... I have been blown away by the response! Thank you for the comments/emails! Being new and unknown I figured this wouldn't gather much attention.

I made a newbie mistake and didn't put this as chapter 1. I *am* working on chapter 2. My editor turned this story around fast, so I hope he'll be able to do the same for chapter 2. Thanks everyone for such a warm welcome :) and making my "first time" painless LOL.

~Dura Blue

Really well drawn characters; can't wait to see what happens.

I couldn't stop reading this!! Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!

Oh man I was sucked into this story right off the bat. You do a great job painting a picture with words. I know you said you're a newbie at this site, but how long have you been writing though? I can't wait to see what happens next. I always loved these kinds of scenarios! Hehe. I am curious though who Ivy's real father is though.

loved this story!! great work!

Im gonna whup your ass so hard you will not be able to sit down for a month of Sundays if you dont bring out chapter 2 fast and the chapter had better be loooooooong and better than this oNE!!!!!!!!!

No pressure though!LOL!

More, more, more!! you had me on the edge of my seat the whole time, please bring us Chapter 2 really soon :-D

Deam! This was explosive! You got me on the edge of my chair, this is one of the most exiting stories I have read. Looking forward to the next chapter.......

Please write a second part and quickly

Fricking Fabulous Is All I Wanna Say ! ! !

I can't wait for more. I can see this story going far. If you keep it up you may end up with a perfect 5 stars with every new chapter. Marvelously conceived and I love the setting.

Hangin' for the next chapter! Got the goods for a great story. Well done.

omg. I love this story. Waiting on the next chapter.

I loved it so much caint wait till the next chapter. Please don't keep us waiting so long!!!!!!! Keep up the good work.

NOM NOM NOM (that means yum...) ...MORE MORE MORE...

this was a damn fine read! welcome to the club =)

i really enjoyed this i hope first chapter and would love to see more please

I can't wait to see more!!

Just a great read!!

Please continue!

Okay I'm late to the party (story of my life these days LOL) but I finally got a bit of spare reading time :-)

Stunning opening chapter! The characters are so vibrant, the creation of the world spot on, and a male lead to make a woman drool. Quite spectacular.

That spells one thing...Talent! You have it dripping from your fingertips in spades and you have me hook, line and sinker!

Brilliant chapter! So looking forward to reading more and as soon as possible.

Jaz

This is a great story. I'm really looking forward to reading more!

You left it at such a huge cliff hanger!! I can't stand it!!! I love the story. The characters are well developed. I want to kill Dolmas & Zan myself!! I can't wait to read more!!! Great job!!!

Please finish it!! This is such an amazing start and I don't want the story to end!!

I like it.

amazing! please write on!

please i'm crying finish this story, DAMN, IT WAS SO GOOD N NOT LIKE SOME OF THESE WANNA BE'S i mean REALLY GOOD, PLZ FINISH

My editor has chapter 2. I'm sorry for the delay, but he just moved. It's coming, guys... please hold on! I'm working on chapter 3 right now.

I so loved this. I can't wait for more and I appreciate your note saying more is coming soon.

What a way to start. Love it.

I'm glad I read this. I saw it many times but just never gave it a chance. I really liked the story line and the semi cliff hanger. (I'm not gonna lie, it was pretty obvious he was the Alpha of the Wolfland Pack.) But I got so caught up in the story the fact that I knew didn't really matter.

I cannot wait for the next chapter of this well done story. Keep up the great work.!!

I am waiting (attempting to wait patiently)......

AMAZING i love this! im obsessing so much its so good! wow

This story is amazing! I really hope you continue writting it :)

I'm deffinietly hooked already!

please keep on writing and posting i love it!!

This story is amazing. Please post the next chapter asap.... I love it already!

i rally hope more of this story is coming soon .i ts been such a long time since i found one soo good ,plz contiue and soon .i can't wait for another chapter i bet it gonna be explosive

Chapter 2 was just submitted. Sorry for the delay everyone, I ran into some problems. I'm hoping things will go smoothly now, and postings will be sooner! It should be up in 72 hours.

That was awesome more and soon please.

I saw chapter 2 posted today and thought I don't remember seeing chapter 1, so here I am. And floored by your first submission to Lit. This is a great story, so good in fact that I'm ending my comments now so I can read chapter 2!

truely an amazing work of art!!! you are truely an amazing writer!!!! Keep them coming!!!

you had me at hello! I have been on my toes, with my nose to the screen reading this. I am loving this story

Just flat out stunned!!! wow great job don't know how i missed this but I'm glad I found it.

only 2 chapters in and i'm like wooo lovin it! keep up the awesome work!

Absolutely love it!! Great writing style, excellent build up to the story and adore both hero and heroine!!

F-ing AWESOME beginning!!!

i'm in loveeeeee

Phew, loved it. Never thought I'd really get into a werewolf love story, but this is great. :)

above mentioned are the only words ..I have!!

I'm going to read the other chapters in hopes that you've progressed as a writer, but I hate to be the only one who noticed all the mistakes in this chapter.

It's an interesting story so I was able to read all of this chapter without too much trouble, but I will say that I think there is an overuse of the words/names Christ, Jesus, God, etc. As well as some overuse of cursing. I could understand if it was just one character who happened to have a foul mouth but it seems that pretty much every character in this story uses those words a lot.

No offense to your editor but it's no wonder he went through this story so quickly, I'm wondering if he even read the thing. There are so many words in it that don't belong and quite a few typos as well. I couldn't help but cringe several times while reading.

The overall telling of the story seemed a bit forced and choppy, but that's easily remedied with practice and I saw you had several chapters up so I'm hoping to see a smoother flow to the later chapters.

All that aside, I did enjoy the story and, like said above, I will be reading the other chapters. I hope I haven't upset you with my critique, I'm merely hoping to give some constructive feedback. I would love to see this chapter rewritten so all the extra words and typos are fixed and the flow is better. I know I need to go back and do that to my stories as well. I'm not saying I'm an amazing writer, I have a long way to go, but I've read enough to be able to feel if a story still needs some work.

Now I'm off to read the next chapter.

Good, waiting for more...

there are some problems, but not enough to seriously impact my reading. Two things to tack onto what he said.

First the use of cunt/tits in the sex scene. Those are the vulgar, dirty, hardcore words. Not what i expect to find when two soulmates are intimate for the first time, one of them a virgin, i the midst of a dream. Cock as well. They just seemed out of place. Ivy is innocent, your word choice was not.

Similarly, ivys father also seemed too profane. He seemed like a dignfied, self absorbed asshole politician. But then he swore like a sailor, for lack of a worse cliche. It just didnt seem to fit his character.

Also, when daylon stormed in at the end he wasnt real eloquent. Whatever he said was really awkward.

Please add more chapters :) love it

I like it

when u finish this was really interseting. i want to know if they get married.

Yeah now this is what I'm talking about. But please keep ivy a strong woman. She stood up to her bastard father keep her strong and no some whimp ass female. She's gonna need to be with the mate she has. I know I'm just now finding your story but I'm hoping I find the above in the rest of the chapters.

Just please don't go to far with the esp crap. I enjoy a good mind control story as much as the next but those things don't mix well.

you had me fighting with her!! THAT IS being A GOOD WRITER

Make one for Holland that would just make my day. He is way too funny.

Addictive! Can't wait to read more!

Am loving your work!

Love it!

Awesome

Omg this chapter was awesome

Real loved reading this i could stop until i had got to the end

I like the dialogue.

There are a lot of grammatical errors and it keeps me from enjoying fully the reading experience. Nonetheless, it's a great story!

The cruelty of the father was a little off-putting at the beginning but I suppose the ending made up for it ;-)

This is really rather charming!

Your words have resonated a very special place within me. Thank you for sharing your stories! As all have mentioned before, you are an exceptional, creative, and sensational writer.

~smiles~

<3

It's cliched... but there are reasons why clichés exist. This is very, very good. Gave me shivers, no lie.

captivating read...!

Enjoyed every word. Looking forward to reading on.