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by Emperor_Nero

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FarnexFarnexabout 17 years ago
Nice use of the lyrics

I am surprised that you are the first person to put that song to a more literal storyline. It just begs for that treatment.

DesertPirateDesertPirateover 16 years ago
Outstanding

Nero, Doing a story from that song is something that needed to be done. You did it perfectly. Hats off to you on this one. Thank You!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Well that was just sad.

From beginning to end.

buzzsawlennybuzzsawlennyalmost 2 years ago

Let me sleep on it...baby,baby, let me sleep on it.... I'll give you an answer in the morning

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