All Comments on 'Finding the Truth'

What the hell is with a rape shit lately, if she cheats forgive or divorce, but to sanction a gang rape, that is wrong on so many levels, not to mention worth at least 12-20 years in a lockup. I don't understand how any morally decent person could write this, much less readers condone and give atta boys in the comments.

Lately?! This story was posted 10 years ago.

I thought the revenge was fitting. Sue was the only one I felt sorry for, but Then she got our hero, so that evened it up. I do feel the other wives should have been told because their husbands each were totally in to fucking Joan, and she being the slut she was would have fucked them without being drugged. They should probably have a private reunion gangbang every year with Joan part of it watching the first one on disc. I was sorry to see Joan and Ray weren't getting along. Also, congrats on you and Sue expecting. This is the way it was obviously expected to be, right? Keep writing.

XYZ

Disappointing effort from a great author

one for the good guys 5*

Load of rubbish.

Setting up the gangbang was gratuitous and slimy. He had plenty of evidence on his wife and didn’t need it. He himself admits it was a pure petty revenge move. He totally gives up the moral high ground. Unworthy of this author.

All the poker buddies were guilty of multiple counts of sexual assault in the first degree and conspiracy to commit the same. Being married does not grant the husband legal authority to gang rape his wife. DG Hear sullied his reputation badly with this poorly conceived submission.

"I explained that she could have everything that we accumulated." Why?

Perhaps it's just me, I don't know, but it didn't quite gel with me somehow, -it felt, I don't know, kind of like it was clumsily "constructed" with the ending already sketched out, then the story built to bolt-on in front of it, rather than the whole thing flowing smoothly and gracefully as if written from the heart!

So for me, at any rate, it wasn't really very credible, and because of that felt somewhat artificial, stiff, clumsy and irritating.

So perhaps Norseman123 was right, and it was written JUST to appeal to the overgrown adolescent culture of the perennial-pubescent "Laddish" culture Louts, and their childish Pooh/Bum/Willy/Cunt/Cunt/Cunt culture?.

So therefore I will stick with my 2*-rating, and leave this Author to those who appreciate this scene.

Good Luck! I wish you well, -just not my cup of tea!

R.S.

I really don’t like vicious revenge, esp. drugging and gang raping. Femdom agitprop is an evil, but surely those are greater evils.

DG certainly likes the idea of rape.

If Ray only married Sue because she got pregnant, what happened to the baby. Sue didn't have it when she found Alex after the divorce.

I liked it. Nice BTB (for Ray and Joan). To Anonymous from 4 days ago, I thought Sue had a miscarriage, early in her pregnancy.

As I have said before, stories where both the cheater and the cheated on are amoral pond scum just aren't my thing. The slut deserves to be dumped, but not to be gang raped. Did the asshole not have even ONE friend who would balk at the idea of raping an unconscious woman? I guess pond scum of a feather sleaze together.

Story .. 1*

Writing .. 4*

No! Not cool. That was gratuitous rape they should all have gone to jail. I'm sure Tony and Brad would have ratted out the MC in the Police interview room . I like this authors stuff but not this one.

Interesting story, but a few niggles.

#1. Hubby drugged his wife, which he admitted to his “ friends”. This info would have gotten out, and he would have been charged with not only that, but raping her as well. Ray, for sure, would have told her. Especially since he was getting divorced over it.

#2. The guys were drunk, but I doubt they all would have went along with it.

#3. He gave her pics of the rape? Once again, she would have taken him to the cleaners. And once she filed rape charges against the other 3, they would have spilled their guts as well.

As much as I love a good BTB, this did not reflect reality.

Wow, I really wish I had the kind of friends the MC had. You can always tell what kind of person someone is by the friends they keep. Imagine all your friends being rapists.

think there needed to be a bit more story of the fallout... either in duration or depth. Otherwise it was an enjoyable bit of justice.

Could have used a donkey!

Unrealistic, should be labeled fantasy. Not the best writing either

Not sure how this doesn't end up backfiring into a criminal case. He already had the audio and they live in a no fault state I presume. So just divorce and move on. His stunt did nothing but poison her relationship with Ray. He coukd still have used the audio to tell Sue, who maybe gets a PI to follow them. Done. No jail time for the MC.

Absolutely fucking stupid. Sounds like another JPB racist rape fantasy. I would say you're better than this, but we both know you're not. You're quantity over quality.