by Enithermon
This is sooooooo good, I've come for seconds! So deliciously hot!!!! One of the many great literary works here that is worth re-reading again and again and again. Thank you!
Did I say this was hot? It doesn't begin to describe how sexy hot this chapter was!
Thank you for aharing your work! This is one of the best chapters/stories on this site
How can I ever be satisfied with meager subsistence of half heartened endeavours of fumbling passion.
I want to THRIVE!
I will have to reread and practice... practice to feel, live as well as you have written here.
Thank you for reminding me that living... not just existing takes effort. I will relearn to exert all the effort I can, until I exist no more.
Hi!
Great job! Great sex ! I wish those Amazon writers had your talent!
Thanks!
...reading that has only increased my annoyance at the fact i'm not getting any!
my fiancee is away... sigh.
seriously, this is a fantastic chapter, and i'm glad you waiting long enough for it not to be stupid, but short enough for us to not get bored.
keep it up, i want to see more writing from you!
k_k
One of the best sex-scenes so far of what I have read at literotica! I would surely like some myself.. Groan..
Good god...that was some intense lovin' and I'm lovin' it! Great work!
that was so hot... you are an AMAZING writer. WOW. 10 stars out of 5.
That was the best literotica story I've read so far!!! Loved it, loved it, loved it!
Wish I had found you a long time ago. And I thought Danielle was the best....
I agree with everything the last poster wrote, you're story is absolutely amazing please continue it
How can this story not rate at the top of the voting category. This story is the most amazing hot sexiest character developed story ever written on this site. Its what Charlaine Harris could include in her southern vampire series to make them perfect for me, and they are darn near perfect as they are, just like yours.
AMAZING.... where do I find sex like that!?
Seriously, this story is one of brilliance...delayed gratification really does have its benefits and your work is a first class example.
Two very enthusiastic thumbs up, now I need to hurry along and finish the other chapters ; D
When I sat down to read, I was cold. I'm sure as hell not cold anymore...
That aside though, you write beautifully. And you have created a wonderful character in your vampire. The way you express his possessiveness, well, just everything in general--wow.
I absolutely love it!! The sex is seriously hot and the story's fantastic too. Very impressed so far.
I love your writing style... I love your characters... The sex is sizzling hot!!! Don't stop writing :)
Absolutely amazing, thats all I have to say. I keep checking back for the next chapter, and the wait is killing me!! You write so beautifully, and not to mention extremly hot!
Absolutely amazing, thats all I have to say. I keep checking back for the next chapter, and the wait is killing me!! You write so beautifully, and not to mention extremly hot!
It was dirty! It was rough! Fuck! It was fucking raunchy dirty hot read! Bloody excellent read! MORE!!! ;p
That was ridiculously off the chain Eni! I am breathless, speechless, in awe! Anxious for the next chapter. Great, great work!
holly fuck! that was awesome. OMG, that was hot! I love how you've written the whole story so far. I loved how he turned into this beast, how the way she makes him feel made him lose all control. But at the same time it was kinda sweet. Gosh, fabulous writting, please post the next one quickly!!!
The story is wonderful and i'm really enjoying it!
Can't wait for some more!
Wonderful story. The anticipation and build up was terrible and wonderfully arousing and kept me glued to the story till the end. Job very well done!
... one of the best sex scenes I ever read on Literotica. And I've been around for over 3 years now... Smoking hot, lots of detail, tension, passion...
Keep bringing on the good stuff!
x
I love this story so wonderful... your a great writer i can't wait for more from you..
I have been checking. Every. Single. Day. to see if there was an update. Finally! And its several pages long! Its perfect! I absolutely loved it! It was well worth the wait. So passionate! That got me totally wet. Please keep the long chapters coming! I can't wait.
Now THAT is what I call a satisfying sex scene! I need to go find my boyfriend......
This chapter was the BEST! And really, it is REALLY ok, if this is the last of the story, it is completely well rounded and damn, SUPER HOT!
Terrific and definitely a Favorite!
I loved the build up and the tension along with the explosion. I think that I'm drooling.
This is an amazing series.... The buildups are perfect, and the interactions between the characters make them so real I'm waiting for them to come in through my front door... I'm definitely looking forward to the rest of this series!
Where to start? I loved the way that both Jairus and Thea threw little temper tantrums, all full of frustration. I loved the way she went to him as he was going to her. And, OMG! That was one of the most sensual, blazing lovemaking scenes that I have ever read! Fire? More like scorching hot! If I had been holding this in book form, it would have sizzled! I am trying to cool off, and am wondering why I thought that I was so finished with vampire stories. Because your story, secretme's Mira,and Elianna's Fallen, have given that tired gendre new life. More please.
smoking HOTT!!! excellent stuff. thanx so much for sharing with us.
This is one of those stories that unfolds with time and the more you read it the more you love it. It's one of those pieces were the sex is worth waiting for because you need to know the background first which is why it's one of my favourite works on literotica. Believe me when I type this I've read a lot of stories half of which I give up reading because there same old same old whereas this has varity in it and a good variety of vocabulary and words. Thankyou you for sharing this story with us literotica readers and I hope there's more to come...
Cant wait for the next chapters to see where they go from here! Thanks for writing this, and i eagerly anticipate more from you!
They don't get any better than this. I'll be watching everyday for the next chapter.