All Comments on 'Fire Ch. 09'

This chapter was wonderful, just like the others. Your writing continues to be top notch. Jairus is perhaps one of the sexiest characters on this website; definitely one of my favorites!!! Please keep writing.

I hope the wait isn't as long for the next one! Thanks for writing!

seriously!!!

love each and ever chapter cant wait till the next one

written so well that it deserves a final wrapping chapter or two or three:)

i ran across your story 2 days ago and have been on "fire" reading until i got caught up. i'm enjoying every bit of your story. jairus, the sex, the chemistry... all so hot! please, please, post another update soon!

Devastated to realise there hasn't been an update for months. This is by far the most compelling read on the site, i've just read it straight through and can't wait for the next installment...I hope it's soon!

:O so cruel to abandon your readers like this. i just came upon this story, and read it straight through and now i'm dying to know what happens next! please finish this story...its well written, the plot and characters are fantastic.

I found this story yesterday, and read it straight through.

You have a unique talent for writing.

Your description of the love scenes are very believable. The feelings your writing has evoked in me are not common.

Please keep up the exceptional story line.

I am now reading your Hunter series, and like it almost as well.

Good Luck,

Oregon Fan!!!

I can't believe how, well you write, its absolutly amazing. I'm very picky about what I read usually I just skim stories to get the general idea of what they are about, its very rare that ill find one where I read it straight through. Its amazing how much talent you have, I was sucked in from the first words, and I can't wait to be able to finish the rest of it. I hope you will be able to finish the story soon, sense this isn't a story you can easily figure out what's going to happen next, this is definitly one in which you must read the whole thing through. You have a wonderful gift for storytelling.

I just found this story recently. I couldn't stop reading it! I hope you continue it further. It still has a great deal of potential.

Thanks for sharing it with us!

I really loved this story and like many others I am very picky about which stories I will read and found yours amasing. I like the characters and flow of the story with an adventure not just sex. I read it all through and now can't wait for more. Hope you post another one soon. Really soon

Just keeps getting better,,great job!!!

This story is wonderful! I love it!

Truly blessed to be able to read this for free. Thanks