All Comments on 'First Day of Summer'

Nobody wants to hear about a wet dream when they are reading stories. Sorry but seris don't fly with most folks!!

it was alright for a start, depending on what you want the story to be about... It's not a good start to a series about love, if it's about encounters during summer you're off to a great start.

Most people who don't read series', don't read series'. But those who do read series', do. I happen to like them, although more than one page per chapeter would be nice.

Keep at it.

no matter what the other comments say, I really enjoyed it. series or not, it was wonderful on its own. I did give a real life giggle at the end, what woman hasn't had that kind of frustrating sexual dream waking up bombarded with emotions? :-) loved it! --Relly

So this was all a Dream? She’s still with Jason!?