All Comments on 'First Day of Summer'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Story

So this was all a Dream? She’s still with Jason!?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
this was great!

no matter what the other comments say, I really enjoyed it. series or not, it was wonderful on its own. I did give a real life giggle at the end, what woman hasn't had that kind of frustrating sexual dream waking up bombarded with emotions? :-) loved it! --Relly

PolyLvrPolyLvrabout 13 years ago
Good start.

Most people who don't read series', don't read series'. But those who do read series', do. I happen to like them, although more than one page per chapeter would be nice.

Keep at it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
"Okay" start.

it was alright for a start, depending on what you want the story to be about... It's not a good start to a series about love, if it's about encounters during summer you're off to a great start.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Who wants to read about a wet dream

Nobody wants to hear about a wet dream when they are reading stories. Sorry but seris don't fly with most folks!!

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