All Comments on 'First Discoveries'

Wow, that was definately one of the best stories I have ever read from this site. Good job. Keep them coming!

& each time is better than the last! I had to think of names & situations 3x b4 I got everything right & the engine spat out a group of stories that had yours in them. IT'S STILL AS GOOD A READ NOW AS WHEN I READ IT THE FIRST TIME!

...because it's been so long that I read it that IT ONLY GETS BETTER with age! I'm also 'optimystique' that it'll be here 5 years from now!

Please tell me there will be a sequel

This is one of the hottest stories I've read on here. I can't bekieve I haven't seen it before. There are lots of mechanical problems, and at times they are very distracting, but they don't take away from the eroticism of the story or the effect on the reader. A little proofreading can fix that. You need to write more. Maybe a sequel, like another reader mentioned?

What a wonderful story! A perfect balance of passion and discussion. It was almost like being there. Well done. Very well done, indeed.

Fabulous