All Comments on 'First Night of Pleasure'

the terseness of your style. Thank you. (You might like my stories too...)

Wow this was great had me turned on the whole time

Very nice description of two people having fun together.

The one word lapse in proofreading is very minor -- "crutch" instead of "crotch" isn't jarring enough to spoil the flow of the story. ("They're" instead of "their" is in the introduction, not the story, and probably wasn't written by the author.)