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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
I LIKED IT!

Great start :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Im ready for HIS point of view! Great first entry!

Great first entry! Please keep writing it flowed really well!

(I think you should have swallowed!)

Jay

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I love that story, it is very sensual

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