All Comments on 'First Time and First Mate'

A very good story and well written. I look forward to more of your stories.

awesome horny story. love the build up now you have started with this first erotic story. and the brilliant writing now time for the next part. i can see. you have try the first fucking now you can start that next hot story

Take it slow, like your protagonist wanted it. Slowly, build it up to a climax, don't rush into it, you have the rest of your writing life to cram in the mundane stuff. Make me hard while I read. Please!