All Comments on 'First Time Without Wife'

by bigtddybr

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Marklynda2Marklynda25 months ago

An interesting story of exploration of the dominant/submissive relationship. More please. A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. As this is my first foray into your writing and the first story you posted here I have added you to my favorites list. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

bhojobhojoabout 3 years ago

Nice tale....

I found a few spelling and grammar points that detracted a little from the flow of the story. Hope sometime you get a chance to revise it...

20 minutes of Keegle -- kegel not keegle

We arranged for diner later -- dinner not diner

Bring my hands up along her body -- bringing not bring

an English saddle at the cantor. -- probably canter not cantor ?

Cum when your ready -- you're not your

SenorDomSenorDomover 3 years ago
Yes, Please!

You are on a roll, keep it coming!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
HOT

oh my that gave me exactly what i needed and i cummed just reading it!! very well written and detailed.

StormzaStormzaover 16 years ago
100/100

i absolutely LOVED it when do we get to see the rest??!?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
SUPERB!

Keep it up. Could you try to do it from the woman's view? and how about reversing roles and have the man get his wish by being the sub? Well written and very Hot!

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15 May 2024. Ch. 65 is stalled because some of my editors were under the weather. She is back now so it should be finished within a couple of days. However, now that I have caught up on all of my chapters on Patreaon, I will be posting to Patreon first. Then to lit three days ...