All Comments on 'First Touch'

and nicely told. Thank you

A very well written expirience, which took this reader back in remembering a never to forget first time. Keep up the good work. This old girl will be looking for your next one!

Excellent -- was that really your first story written?

...pulled this reader right along with you!

Thank you, please keep writing.

and so well written, hope you keep writing...

Great story please post more!

Well-written and sexy. I loved the seduction, and the pushing of boundaries.

I picture the main character being played by Felicia Day of "the Guild", and knew instinctively that she was much prettier than she gave herself credit for (and isn't that the case with a lot of young women?).

Yer profile says you are between the ages of 27 and 32... which means you are too young to have such vivid memories of the time period. But you pulled it off. And without making it too obvious... like so many movies based in decades past, where they try WAY too hard to throw in period references. It seemed effortless... as if the main character wrote this in her diary soon after the events.

Good job.

So true to life. Sweet and sexy and funny.

This is really sexy. Thank you for posting it!