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Click hereLynne pulled forward and positioned his cock on her beautiful ass and continued to glide it back and forth between her cheeks as he too came, coating her ass in cum. In a matter of seconds, the stranger withdrew his cock and we were alone.
I reached over and flipped off the light and handed Lynne another towel and helped her get cleaned up.
She wrapped her arms around my neck and sighed, "Thank you SOOO much. That was amazing!"
I looked down at my exhausted, naked and incredibly sexy slave/wife and said, "Yes you were. You were amazing." Once we were dressed, we headed down the stairs.
We ran into Mr. Wills who asked, "Leaving so soon?"
I told him that it was getting late and that we had a long ride ahead of us so we were headed home. He said he understood and that he hoped we would come back again. I assured him that we would, shook his hand headed for the car.
I hardly had the car on the main road before Lynne was sound asleep with her head in my lap.
We're planning our next trip to the club so stay tuned...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoThe people commenting I mean.
Pathetic lives to make such comments.
mel_pomeneover 10 years ago... you wouldn't have got all this grief; LW is notoriously fussy about BDSM stories 'invading their territory'. As it went, it was pretty good, but I would advise you to do as FA_JF said, and try to get it moved. Please keep writing and do your best to ignore the hypercritical - four stars.
Ygraineover 10 years agoYou provide no information about yourself on your biography so it's difficult to know how much literary experience you have. From the story you have offered, I would suggest you could improve by finding an editor or proof reader who will pick up your word ommissions and silly word check errors eg "she messaged his cock" - you mean she was skilled in sign language for the deaf/blind or you have changed an "a" to and "e"? It would also help if you read your work through and invested in a thesaurus so that when you write the same word or phrase twice within the space of two lines, you can substitute something else to capture your reader's attention rather than battering them into a state of mental numbness.
Anonymousover 10 years agoNothing new; just a regurgitation of the same old "I am so proud that my wife can handle 15" cocks non-stop for 30 hours."
p.s. The only difference between this any the other cuckold stories today is this numbnuts has yet to admit he is a cuckold.
