All Comments on 'Firsts Ch. 02'

please please please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!

Keep up the good work!

Glad you're writing both the girl's & guy's POV. Hope you update soon!

thank you for posting the second chapter! I have been checking EVERY DAY!Please give us some more soon!!!

... you're working on the story again! And it was nice to see Gabriel's point of view, too - I was wondering if he'd felt the same. I do hope you plan to continue - and sooner rather than later. Thanks for sharing! :-)

i totally agree with another comment on your first chapter. Your way of writing is fresh and good.. interesting way of tellin the story.. please keep on going

Great story line, have been watching for more. nice work. The wait for more is killing me. Will checked back often.

cant wait for the rest, its great

Over half way through this chapter I felt like I was reading chapter 1 all over again. Will start the next but quit if it's like this one. It'l like WTF !!