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by Discord69

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Discord69Discord69almost 10 years agoAuthor

I would appreciate any constructive criticism, or comments anyone has about my first story. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Pretty good

I really enjoyed it, well done for the first story - it was very good, however I did get a little confused with the back stories of their lives it might just be me though.

Discord69Discord69almost 10 years agoAuthor

What were you confused about? Perhaps I can clarify it.

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