All Comments on 'Five O'Clock Commuter Fantasy'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Suprisingly awesome!

Really nice pace to this story giving a continuous build without making it too unrealistic A* from me :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
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Very nice and intrestin make more of this please

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