by ForeverAngel
I have read both of your stories "flashes", which I thought were very well done, and this story as a continuation of those stories.You do write with a lot of passion, and your writing is very descriptive. I hope that you fill in with a little history as to who 'he' is and how she met him. Is he the one in her dreams,and will she finally realize why she is having all of the feelings she is having for him.I am very glad that you have resumed posting to this site,and will be looking to read the next installment of your fine story.Thank You for your work and effort in posting your story, You do write well, and what you write is very exciting....Rich
If you ever need someone to ask the right questions I'm available. I would love to be the one that surprised you in your room.