All Comments on 'Flo: My Step-Son's Got a Gift'

Loved the premise, but hitting the ceiling was too far fetched. "Anon" is right though... you need fresh eyes to proofread your stories, spell check is not enough. Not only misused words but missed words altogether. Would have been hotter to me if this was a story between mother and son. I gave this one three stars.

This was a great story! Now you should do more chapters. The step-son should have sex with her while on the phone with her husband, while she's doing a conference call, and especially when his dad comes home. There should be several close encounters that add to the stepmother's lust with her stepson. This story was great please add more.

A good storyline though.

I like the thought that he is going to be fucking his step-mother a lot.

Apologies to those who found this hard to read. I did proof it myself, but obviously missed some spots. Thanks for your comments.

You need to write more of this. I dore the idea of it and can't wait to see you expand on it :)

Very good stories. Pending the result with impatience and waiting for more details on the people to facilitate the imagination.

If you are going to write a mother/son story then why make it about a "Step" son!

Either it is a mom/son story or it is not.

A Mom/"Step" Son story is like making beefburgers with soya beans!

If you have a problem with mom/son relationship then simply stay out of the genre.