by BettyBlue
and all the better because it's set in my city. Thank you.
Great story, just the right length, and nice build up... thanks.
Great story.. Very well written. Hope to read some more of your good writtings.
Good story and Good English...well written.
Hope there is a follow-up story.
I felt myself in the mist both as an observer and participant. A great tribute to the men in uniform and the ladies who love them. Hope to see more
A fine story. You're an excellent writer with a deft touch.
You're off to a great start on what i hope becomes a multi part story. Can't wait for the next one.