All Comments on 'Flowers for Jill'

Christ that was intense! Loved it

You are a very talented writer! I look forward to reading more from you. Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

Fun times

Really, really good!

Thank you - I enjoyed it - well written.

Writing that can turn me on and send my to the dictionary. Bravo!!! And an intriguing ending. I hope to read more.

Ditto on the dictionary. I am often educated on this site, but not with new words. A 5 story!

You're a great writer, this is so hot.

That is the HOTTEST description I have ever read...and I look forward to reading on!!!!

while writing this wonderful story of THE most pleasurable of animal experiences in life !

But I found it a little pretentious. As if the sex is better because he has money, and would be cheap if he really did have to work a night shift at a factory. And her pointing out the brand name of everything is a little annoying. That said it's a great story, having read all the chapters, but I had to comment about this. Your writing is also very good, even publishable...