All Comments on 'Flying the Coop Ch. 02'

Too much comma confusion, but such an excellent story that not even Strunk & White would complain.

(Apologies if I'm repeating myself here, but my first comment doesn't seem to have posted properly)

Thank you for updating! I loved it! I hope there will be a third chapter soon! And please make it longer.. your chapters are way too short!

I really like it! Although like the other person said, you're chapters are too short. I hope you update soon!

I reallly loved this so pleaaassseee finish out this story!!!

More please!! Seriously hot as well as romantic!!

I read your other story "Incubus" and it has prompted me to read more of your works. I like your style. Not too much sleazy dialogue unlike the other stories in this site. Yours is neat and tidy and there's proper pacing. Good job! I hope you would continue! :)