All Comments on 'Football Saturdays Ch. 02'

To convoluted and essayesque for my taste, also I really don't like it when the grammatical person changes in the middle of a story. Scenario is interesting though.

I love it! The kinkier, the better!

In view of the introductory remarks it surprising to find the author capable of writing such excellent pornographic fiction.

Takes a lot of talent and a disiplined mind. Fully merits 5 stars.

Wen you gonna write another one