All Comments on 'Football Star Pt. 02'

An interesting reversal in this kidnapping story.

I usually root for the underdog(s) and thus, was happy with this story's conclusion.

Very erotic tale for sure and the twist(ed) ending was fun as well. I guess we all lusted after at least 1 hot teacher when we were school boys. I know I did and she was a real beauty pageant winner whom I had (I wish) for homeroom and 3 other periods out of 7 during the day. I sat right up front imagining her without clothes and .... oh well one can imagine what I imagined.

I also noticed a few typos here and there, e.g., tits JIGGLE not giggle and spellcheck wont catch such errors. And, at the risk of sounding as though literary license should have its limits, going from anal to vaginal back and forth is less than sanitary -- it's risky in that fecal matter should not be introduced into the vagina which can cause infection -- but WTF, it's a story, so enjoy lol! Who wouldn't want to fuck 3 sexy females in the ass? Speaking of which if non-consent stories with anal rape are one's thing, check out my 3-chapter story and let me know how you like it!

fantastic story!a sequel would be a dream!

both parts where just incredible. The best story i've read in along time. My mind is just exploding. If a movie could come anywhere close to detail in this story it would be on tv's everywhere 24/7. I would easily pay for a good movie if it did this story justice.

I loved how this story had two parts, with the first outlining and describing the events and justice being done in the second part. One the things I'm really into is pregnancy fantasies (not reality, not only no but FUCK NO - RATHER RIP MY OWN TUBS OUT FIRST), and I think of them both fucking him and not getting off of him in time and while in prison they realize their both pregnant with twins and eventually when their milk starts coming the male guards notice and start having gang-bangs and milking sections throughout their entire pregnancies.

Revenge mother suckers i am glad you ended this story with a super high note and i hope you will continue the series maybe make one where they escape before the cops get there and plan their revenge on jake and megan

But I would have made a deal with Lindsey and miss Lee for them to be thier sex slaves for keeping quiet about the kidnapping. I mean if they want him that bad and not to go to jail then everybody wins

Ok but what was the aftermath?