All Comments on 'For Her Family Ch. 08'

I loved your whole story until the incest. I just can't get into that. But other than that it was great action.

the ever increasing debauchery that Alex went through is such a turn on. You need to keep writing stories such as this one. I pretty much knew early on that the Husband was the blackmailer, but the daughter threw me for a loop. A+

Well written - minor typos - plot developed with exceptional skill - writing shows imagination with command of language arts - as an English Lit major and avid reader of erotica, this author is exceptional - A+ and certainly publishable. Thank you and hope to read more of your work. I have some suggestions just too add a little "polish" to such fine writing.

you should keep going with this family, and the co-workers!

It got me so hot, you're very good at this. Please write some more. ;)

I kept hoping that Alex would continuous get into another escapade and she did thanks.

Good story up till chapter 6, then it just silly and unreal.

Great story i would like to read more with maybe more out side playing and more other fun people!

A long nasty drivel, stupid and boring.