by Myhands316
As requested I have left this here while I sort out a few things in my life. But unfortunately all too soon I will have to pull this down and finish it for publication. When I originally started this, it was in response to another story of the same genre that I was helping another author with. Ergo how it is incomplete. Yes it continues, being both loving and tragic, since I am looking at history for the story line. Please remember, "They lived happily ever after," is only in fairytales.
Thank you so much for reading my work, and as soon I know when and where I will be posting new stuff, I'll let you know.
Myhands316
HOW CAN YOU DO THAT?! please please please dont remove it!!!! I'll cry if you do!!!! please please!!!!!!! :'( this is me, a rare sight, on my knees begging you to leave it there... please.... please.... *breaks down into sobs*
please...
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I wrote this to see if I could write a good flash story. I have learned that they are not my forte'. So, soon I will be pulling this story down and giving it a full treatment and see if it is any better. I want to thank my readers for their support over the long period that I have been away from activly writing for this site. I have one story to post, then to rewrite this one, and then unfortunatly I will have to take another break in the real world of making money to put beans on the table. Thank you again.
Myhands316
I enjoyed it very much would like to see a sequal could be a very good light sub/dom love story :) would very much enjoy reading more if you continue but now i think i have to go read some of your other stuff
It would be interesting to read further of the story, for I think it has good potential.
A few minor niggles (probably due to auto-correct spelling) but a fine effort.
HP