All Comments on 'Forbidden Desires'

Great story, I loved the relationship between Alejo and Bella and the way he used her and teased her in public was so hot! Would love to hear more from you in this category!

I LOVED THIS STORY! seems like everything you write i love, it nice to see you in a different category. i think everyone would like to hear more about bella and alejo are you thinking of writing a second chapter?

I have been waiting for someone to make a story like this. Please make more chapters. I would like to know what happens with the step dad. If Bella gets jealous. This was a awesome . I was reading this during class and this had me ready to rush my teacher. Thanx for sharing your talent

How do you come up with this stuff? Everything you write just seems to get better and better! One of the best stories I've read by far and the second weekend in the cabin, with the plug in the restaurant and the overload of orgasms, was incredibly written and so hot! I could feel everything he was making her feel! I would love to hear more from these two if you were thinking about it? If not thank you again for a great read!

This is really a great story, made me shiver!