All Comments on 'Forbidden Love Ch. 01'

Can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

Good start; looking forward to more.

Interesting start, and story idea. BUT it was kind of information overload. You went on so many little tangents about every detail that I soon became bored and found myself skipping ahead. Yet I am curious about where you're going to take this next so I will keep reading and give this chapter a 3.

Did you base this off of Tokio Hotel? Just wondering :P

very nice start. this is an interesting mix of characters for a lit story. keep up the good work. tokio hotel?

hi!!

Aaahh this is really great! linking the whole church girl and rockstar love! The way you described Wil...well I have a soft spot for guys like that hahaha!

Please update the next chapter soon!!!!!!

you are good at this

Come on more I wanna see what happens between themO_O

I wanna read how the Christian girl gives-up her innocence to the bad rock star boy, how she lets HIM -- not the Christian guy she may later marry -- be the first to penetrate her and give her all those feelings she desires.