All Comments on 'Forbidden Lovers: A Second Chance'

by CLorenzo2

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marklionmarklionover 14 years ago
Great Chapter!!!!!

You wrote another great chapter in the series. It was nice to see the Christopher made it through the accident and he and Mary Beth Back together again. I hope you write another chapter to see how things work out between them in the future.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Super

Great story and characters. But you should put chap numbers in the titles. I read one out of sequence.

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