All Comments on 'Forbidden Summer'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Stories Like This One Are Why I Dream At Night!

Simple, SEXY, and to the point!

No wasted words or touches--EXCELLENT!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
In the Moment

Very good writing. You went from moment to mement without losing the rhythm.

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