All Comments on 'Forever'

This was an excellent story. You have proved that everything doesn't have to be a quick "wham-bam, thank you ma'am" sort of deal. It was beautifully written. I almost cried with them. Please continue to write more.

A very nice story - took its time and developed naturally. Thanks!

Ahem, I have a simple question... WILL YOU MARRY ME!?!?!

I love this story! beautiful build-up! Appreciate how gentle she was, showing love ofr someone who only knew violation.

it's amazing, true love waits.

I've read this story several times now & it never loses it's appeal - I apologise for not leaving a comment the first time, it's a beautiful, well written story that reminds me that romance & true love do still exist in this cynical world.

xxx

Very good story. Loved how the characters' relationship builds over time to naturally segue into a protective and loving physical intimacy.

this story is so beautiful and it made me want to cry. I want to have a lover like Liv who is gentle, sweet and kind. you are an excellent writer.

That just made me remember my love and how much I love her. Please continue this story

Love love love this story really hope you continue it!!!!!!!! Great job!

Other than externals - their careers, Jen's abuse history - I don't know anything about who they are. The sex is definitely hot and the story is sweet, but it needs a lot more character development to really draw me in.

I really enjoyed reading about Liv bringing Jen out of her shell. Well written, and thanks for sharing it with us!

A delightful little story. Not much true mystery. We all new what was going to happen. The destination was never in question.

It was the details of the journey we all savored.