All Comments on 'Forever Love Ch. 03'

looking forward to next one

Having Alex saved by the Were's was a nice surprise. I wonder if Lelam's decission to let the wolves save Alex come back to haunt him. Oh well, I think he has his hands pretty busy right now w/Marie.

Really well-written. I wish Lelam would explain things to her though I guess he needs to get her to calm down first. this could get messy with alex loving Marie. I wonder if he'll think she is his mate. I'm certainly glad he made it. I am wondering what position lelam is in in the coven. He refers to his father being in charge though he seems to take all the action. I am anxious to see how she will react when he can explain shit to her. good stuff

I am surprised that Alex handled his change so well. Marie didn't even listen to Lelam. Is this a love triangle forming?

it would have been better for alex not to be involved it will hurt thier friendship

Definitely approve. Nice is the wrong word, but I've got a feeling it's setting up something even better, so I love it anyway. This story could go a very long way, and I'm eager to see how far it does go!

I love it!

Please don't wait to long with finishing the next chapter

#1 - You need a well read editor A.S.A.P.!

Examples:

A plethora of spelling errors.

Sentences that make no sense.

Incorrect word usage.

#2 - Is English not your native tongue? I ask, due to the types of errors in your story.

Examples:

Sometimes your sentence construct is baffling or redundant.

You don't have a clear knowledge of euphemisms.

Incorrect usage of words to describe past, present and future tense.