All Comments on 'Forget Living Well'

I guess he got what he wanted but he didn't find out why she felt she had to fuck Kevin all the time.

He might be a bastard but she is definitely a slut.

the divorce laws!

I can't say she gets a lot of sympathy from me ... she played with fire and got burnt!

If anyone was the winner I'd say it was Ron.

Good story, Bob.

Regards, DJ

not one of your usual stories.

its different from his usual, but he's not that good making revenge stories. i would rather he stick to cuckold stories. he seems to know that subject very well.

I have to say I liked it.

It was fantasy, it over over the top, and totally unbelieveable, but at least the husband didn't just sit in a corner crying "Why did this happen to me". He did something about it. Just not what you would have thought. While I personally am a big fan of just leaving the situation and not to get revenge, something can be said for the revenge path every once in a while.

It did have some of the elements of JPB's stories in it (Sloppy seconds or thirds, etc) enough that at times I was repulsed as normal, but it still was a good read even with all of that slid in.

-Risq

Now the cuck fans will be after you.

Someone said Ron would be the winner. But, I think if she just thought things through here a little she could get rape charges against her husband and Ron and old black cock Ronnie could easily end up with child support payments. I don't think he should be thought of as a winner. He could be the big loser.

Good story.

Charleybear

There was some unrealism, such as why he didn't realize that she was cheating when he found out that he was sterile. HELLO, the kids aren't HIS! However, it was still a rather interesting revenge plot, and given how the wife behaved, I don't blame him for setting her up. It's not like she wasn't cheating already. I just wonder he could have kept up the patience to portray the "doting cuckold husband" of his cheating wife.

This is still a fascinating, suspenseful plot, and it was a lot of fun to read. Since I've never really agreed with that saying, either, I have to say that I prefer to read about actual consequences sometimes. Not that a naughty spouse getting away with it isn't a guilty pleasure, but a good dose of retaliation fits my keen sense of karmic justice. There was karma in spades on this.

Then there was the hubby's sense of humor. Yes, he seemed to have plenty of it, which probably helped, given how pissed-off and agitated he'd have to be. I'm not sure that I would have found too much hilarious if I were him. But, of course, I was on the outside, so I could laugh at some of the absurdity of it all. That the wife couldn't see that she was being set up was the biggest joke of all, of course, and THAT I would have found humorous, even at my angriest.

Give this one a 4. It was a nice plot, but the lack of realism on the sterility issue cost it a point in the believability aspect. I don't agree with those who suggested that JPB return to cuck stuff. I like seeing him branch out into revenge stories. For one thing, it confuses everyone, and that is a nice joke as well. Hope he continues and improves in this genre of vengeful husbands.

Severus: he didn't find out he was sterile; he had a vasectomy when she decided that she wanted a third kid. In other words, he made himself sterile. Granted, the other two kids might not have been his either, and a DNA test on them would clear that up right away.

Little things tend to bug me, and the line about how "she put her cock into his mouth" is the reason that this story didn't get 100 from me.

I agree with SEVERUSMAX: the hubby playing the caring, loving husband for six months isn't credible. He will either a) blow it and let something slip, b) fall into depression, or c) lose patience and get on with the divorce.

It is apparent that there is no respect in the marriage. The wife cheats on the husband and he cares so little for her that he doesn't tell her that he's become sterile. The foundation underpinning the marriage is already cracked and the collapse is only accelerated by the infidelty.

I suppose that I disagree with JPB's basic premise b/c I do believe that living well is the best revenge. In the story, the hubby endures six months of misery and hateful indifference to what end? A short-lived euphoria of "Gotcha, bitch. Take that." He may feel relief, even joy, at the dissolution of the marriage but in no sense of the word is the man happy. Smug in his "vindication" but not happy.

His actions to facilitate a favorable outcome in the divorce are despicable. He enticed another man to be unfaithful, ruined his ex-wife's relationship with her relatives, caused a child to enter the world who will grow up in a broken home, and committed felony assault and battery. He's a criminal on many levels and certainly not a person with whom I would associate.

The good news is that he's now sterile and cannot add further to the gene pool so I guess every cloud does have its silver lining.

I always read your stories, but with a bit of trepidation - -the husbands are always wimps and the cheating wives/ex-wives are always putting one (or more) over on him. The situations never seem life like, so even though the stories are well written and start with interesting premises, I am always left disappointed.

Not this time - - this was a well written story with a real world reaction by the jilted husband and a compelling tale throughout.

Thanks for writing and posting this one. A winner! Keep it up.

Excellent story! Well written! Believable!

Enjoyed the story and I loved the revenge.

it had a good beat and was easy to dance 2. Well really because I'm trying to encourage the writer to do more of these and less the other (you know).

Seriously, this kind of story appeals to and entertains more readers and selfishly I'm one of them - so go Bobie - make believers of the majority of us.

Thanks

In reality it wouldn't have been that cut and dried with the black kiddo as lawyers would have found a way to make the husband pay, but it rated high as you seemed to enjoy yourself and actually worked out a story the way a normal person would think.

One of your better stories. Who is the real JPB?

Boyd

JPB I rarely ever give a score of 100 but this one deserves it. OH and to Charleybear, she can't file "rape" charges BECAUSE her husband TOLD her he was bringing a friend over, and she started moaning his name. She AGREED to everything her husband did, she was even BEGGING for it. Like the old saying goes "You Can't Rape A Willing Soul"!!

Thanks Bob......

Paul

This is still one of my favs, Bob. Right up there w/ Vonnie & The Long Weekend; not to mention Sweetmeat. Sorry that you've not written much new lately, I've gotten used to all your stories, even the ones w/ endings that distress me. Oh, well, post some more, you need the challenge. Thanks again.

Yah that was a revenge. Good enough, i Guess! But, honestly I just don't understand how in hell you can justify the revenge through a Child who is innocent to all the mess! The baby is sure gonna go through a hell growing up .. being a black by a white mother, a bastard and all. It is very very much unjust to victimize a kid for anyone's revenge. Well it's only my opinion.

I know it's a fiction!!! But still it left a foul taste!!!

I hate your cuckold stories but when your write along these lines your just couldn't be better.

But I agree, for the most part, with Alvaron. Also, bringing an innocent (the child) into the plot was just evil.

Fuck You....Sincerely....a Black baby

Looks like he got at least one up. HA HA HA HA HA.

However, the criminal assault and beating of Kevin was so outragious and uncalled for that I rated it 1*.

the wife was a whore anywqay

Thanks for sharing this very entertaining story.

about the laugher, the vas-cut, and not counting the chickens, TK U MLJ LV NV

It took too long to get his revenge. He should have beat the shit out of Kevin way before she had the baby. Still she got screwed in the end. A fitting life for a cheating whore slut wife. Fuck her.

HA

i enjoyed reading this. Well written and the bitch got what she deserved.

Using a baby to get even is on the sick side. That was a deal breaker for me in this story. eck!

1. Let's hear from the ladies. If you were blindfolded and fucking missionary style, could you tell if it was NOT your husband of 9-10 years?

2. I continue to be amazed at the lover's vehicle being parked in the driveway or in front of the house. I've read this in so many stories. This one may have been even more UNbelievable since it was two "NAPA" trucks.

There is nobody to like in this story and too many problems as well. First of all, what kind of an asshole goes behind his wife's back and gets a vasectomy? That would count as an ultimate lie and betrayal of his marriage. He should have just stood his ground and suffered the consequences.

Also, are there really married couples out there who always use condoms unless they are trying to conceive? That is just sad (and oh so unbelievable).

Next, what kind of guy is Ron that he is willing to sire a child and never own up to it or provide for its care? As a husband with 5 children, he does not seem the type to make such a decision so lightly.

Lastly, it is doubtful that hubby would have been granted custody of the children even given the circumstances presented. However, it is even more doubtful that he would have gotten away with his little scheme.

Sandy had to know that her husband set her up. A little research by her attorney would have turned up that her husband had a good friend named Ron who was black. A threatened lawsuit and associated DNA test would have loosened Ron's tongue. Hubby would have been up against a host of charges and Ron would have found himself paying child support and possibly divorced.

There were no likable characters and too many holes in the plot for this story to be enjoyable.

It was very good. So whine your way over to the cuck stories.

I just reread this story and realized that I had not commented on the thing that bothered me the most. Old Kevin got a free pass. Where was the revenge on him? He should have been the prime target for a little justice, considering "Thou shalt not covet thy neighbor's wife" and all that.

I also did not like the whole angle with Ron. The child does not deserve to face the life he will have to face. It would have been better if it had been Kevin's kid. At least then he would have to pony up for some child support.

Oh, and to Anonymous on 02/07/15, piss off you simple minded ass. You can fantasize about all of the cuck stories you want. I don't care for them myself.

You read the story twice and didn't notice the part where Kevin was severely beaten and robbed? It was implied that the husband set that up while his buddies supplied the alibi.

What he and Ron did was nothing short of a rape... and that is the reason I don't like this story

But I STILL don't think a Judge gives him custody. Not in today's Court system. The Court would have mandated Child Protective Services to interview the kids and guess who loved their Mother, regardless of her cheating? So she got the kids, alimony, child support and the home until the kids all graduated. That, my friends, is how the Courts roll these days. Good fantasy story, but the truth was he got screwed.

Bad job of making this story even remotely readable. The husband is the worst person in the whole thing lol . she is better off out of his life. She has a black baby but knows she has never slept with a black guy, Easy to figure out what happened thus hubby and Ron get prison. Just ridiculous and don't say it's fiction. fiction means it isn't a true story this is just fantasy, big difference.

Only thing - will Ron get hit for child support?

There was at least one comment that played the "rape card." That I don't agree with. Point of fact, during one of their sessions he flat out told her that a guy he knows with 5 kids is going to get her pregnant.

In the end none of the characters was likable and all of their actions was, in my opinion, reprehensible. But, sadly, I could identify all of these characters as people I've known in my past, so I can't say that (excepting the court verdict) it was way off base.

Well written even if I didn't agree with the character choices.

5* for a funny short!

kept the mongoloid halfbreed butt-dumpling ??? 1*

WTF ? what kind of cuckold keeps a "kid" that isnt his ? and is a mongoloid halfbreed ?

hope he dies alone , with his cuckold prize .

1*

Where the fuck did you read he kept his ex-wife's bastard?

Missed the whole part where he threw the whore out of his house, but kept HIS kids, not her last on?

Can't write or read for shit... keep on being an anon, retard.

Sure is extreme, but boy was it effective.

I'll always root for men fighting tooth and nail to make sure their children spend the least time possible with their cheating exes - unfaithfulness is a clear sign that a female would be a untrustworthy mother. You don't want you kids growing up with this kind of influences around them, 24/7... So better what you have to do to make sure it doesn't happen.

That being said, I may understand the need of such a plan to take its time to fully unfolded, and, in the long run, it's way worth the wait... til, 'cannot see how I could stomach being around such a cunt for this long, even if the payoff was worth it. This is why people like the hero of this story are true bosses, in my book - to be force to stick around for this long, just to get full vindictive at the end... seriously doubt I could be this patient.

Anyway, one great Bob story.

How exactly did this guy managed to be married to Sandy for more than a decade without ever mentioning his good high school buddy Ron to her?

JPB always have those little things that doesn't make his stories hold up to scrutiny. Nonetheless, still a good read.

I wish I could vote below one, but that's not possible.

Black baby!? Loved it!!

One of Bob’s best ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Nice tight story. The premise was a little forced at beginning to set up the tale but nice twist at the end. Good clean fun. Although it doesn’t make sense that a guy who is restrained enough not to attack his wife’s lover would then be morally detached enough to set her up to be raped and impregnated by his buddy.......And...We didn’t really read any sort of reaction from the wife wondering how she had a black baby. We are assuming that Kevin is not African because he splits on her after the baby is born, presumably because he could see it was not his.

One of.his best. Old Bob likes to put blacks.in.his stories and this time he did it right.

Who would want a piece of shit lIke that for a wife. No man would. Even the father of her baby didn't want responsibility. That was no surprise though. Statistically it's a fact.

he was attacked again. This time his nose was broken AGAIN, his jaw was broken AGAIN, 5 ribs were broken this time and his testicles were crushed. He lost his left testicle this time as it could not be saved.

6 months after this incident he was attacked again. This time he lost his right testicle and his cock would never be the same as it had been crushed.

He decided to leave town and move 50 miles away. A year later he was attacked again and this time his knees and hands were the target. They had to replace both knees with Stainless Steel ones and his hands were unusable.

He moved to the other side of the country after that but his problems did not end.

He was attacked again. His nice new knees were damaged and he lost his legs above the knees this time. Am I vindictive? You betcha. I was questioned after each attack and had an alibi so no charges were laid.

Another ridiculously stupid pile of crap from this never was. How ANYONE thinks this idiot is any good is beyond me.

What's with these "did I mention ###### is black?" Cheesy! Creative - Not!

What is sad is someone made a part2 for this story where wife screws over exhubby

JPB's decision to have the wife give birth to a child fathered by a black man is blatantly racist. With the PI's report and video in hand, the husband would have good reason to check the baby's DNA against his own and thus show he is not the father. Having an interracial baby is intended to represent a greater embarrassment and source of shame for the unfaithful wife. To consider infidelity to have degrees of injustice and disrespect based on the skin color of the paramour is the very essence of racism.

Racism is a sad and pitiful constraint on our basic rights and freedoms. It is a slur on our shared humanity. I hope JPB considers the impact it has had on him and those he loves.

The half black baby isn't so much about the race as it is the incontrovertibly of the cheating.

Another Home run Bob!!!

One of old Bob's better stories. That'll teach the bitch to cheat.

Just hang yourself and the world can be a better place

Nice revenge schtick, there is only one race:human. But then again they wouldn’t know the difference between race and ethnicity.

1 star for a crappy revenge plan. It's gross! Someone must like being a cuck at some level to take sloppy seconds, bareback or gloved. I can't understand the mentality of continuing fucking a cheating bitch. There are a lot better revenge plans available.

Ah c'mon JPB - we already know you have a four inch dick and Ron being black is packing a ten incher. Even your bimbo wife can tell the difference there.

Yup, me thinks the same. One would think wife would recognize different men even without seeing. Then again she would know that black baby was a result of "role playing" and this would not turn out to be good for Bob. In fact, that would amount to rape.

This whole idea of "role playing" plot is full of holes although the story is entertaining.

Beyond stupid. You can set your watch by the cookie-cutter crap this never-was puts out.

1 star - stupid crap

First of all no reputable medical service would perform a vasectomy on a married man without his wife's consent. No tubal ligation or hysterectomy without husband's consent either. She can sue the clinic.

Second in the case of a problem with a child like this the baby is put into the "Don't Show" nursery. Primary used for babies being put up for adoption but for other difficulties as well.

Third her best bet would be to confess in court. Own up to what happened. In other words tell the judge about the night she was blindfolded. Her husband brought in the guy. He consented to the sex and the possibility of pregnancy. That would have helped her father not to be so angry with her hopefully.

Fourth the baby should have never left the hospital. She should have signed adoption papers before she left. The only one who could have stopped that was the father of the child. Her husband would have to pay child support if he did and Ron would lose his family and pay child support if he tried. She had a lot to gain by putting it up for adoption.

Your protagonist is an asshole. He brought an innocent child into the world and took revenge on it. He is responsible for this child being born.

This is not one of your better stories.

Back in the 70s, there were three states that had statutes against sterilization without spousal consent. Currently, there is no state law which mandates spousal approval for a vasectomy.

Further, if a physician forces a spouse to disclose medical details with his wife, this could trigger a HIPAA problem. In this light, the physician would not have disclosed any protected health information. But, the patient might argue he was coerced by the physician against his will to do so; particularly if he was led to believe he had no option.

Obviously, this is a fictional tale and the husband made some questionable choices, but I would argue that if the no fault divorce.laws were fair he wouldn't have needed to. A husband should have just as much right to custody as a wife and should not be fiscally punished because of a cheating spouse. In any other form of contract, the guilty party is punished for breaking the terms. Why are marriage contracts different?

Well written, a few typos. While the story was well written, causing a woman and child to live a life of struggles and suffering I feel that is wrong. Sometimes people are too petty.

Enjoyable fictional story.

Lilac, he also engaged in a conspiracy to commit rape by deception

Not pleased with the story line at. Even knowing and accepting it as fiction . Wrong, just wrong

No one to like inthis story

Disgusting .

If she was worth a shit she would have dropped the mongoloid for adoption .

One of your worst, I'm afraid, but that's what happens when you put out 852 stories on a free website. Quantity over quality is your motto? Or, more likely, you are a conglomerate composed of a few dozen writers...

Any man who has intercourse with their wife after she's cheated is a disgusting coward and as pathetic as his whore wife.

No

Aways a great read.

Sometime it’s worth it to endure a little indignity to achieve a much greater purpose. He played the long game very well. 5*