Forgetful Maid

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One violent thrust of her hips was all she managed before every muscle quaked in a racking judder. Her legs lifted high and wide to capture all of him then wrapped them around his waist pulling tight to keep it penetrating deep as possible.

She was completely dependent upon his thrusts for she couldn't move. He pushed home one final thrust before spurting into her. Another orgasm spread from her clenched belly following heated nerves to curl her toes and hands clenched tight.

She wrapped her arms around his back needing to be completely engulfed by him. Whimpering a slight little sound she breathed out barely audible words. "Thank you, Master."

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well that was a failure. It was a mess to start with. Why would a husband be upset that his wife stopped smoking do to hypnosis? And what miracle would have to happen that an untrained husband could whisper a phrase and control his wife when the original work took so long and was on a completely different subject? This whole mess was a complete waste of time. Unbelievable and poorly written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
forgetful maid

sorry...took too long to get anywhere.

Worst than a busload of horny teenagers!

egosumquisumegosumquisumalmost 13 years ago
I liked the plot, I liked the hypno, I liked the whore.

This story is amazing. I loved the way stuff was presented and then performed. I really appreciated that you never lost any precious time trying to create a distasteful picture of the protagonist, while almost every author here wants to describe a poor picture from lame pornstars they believe will help dealing with their lack of imagination (and consequently they demean readers’ capabilities to imagine). I also enjoyed the logic on which the story’s based; but I believe it’s a bit of a turn off when we could actually know what happened inside Helen’s head while she was under hypnosis; noneheless this was skillfully managed when she finally visits Roger. I’m pretty satisfied with your text. Thank you very much for your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
get a proofreader

You really need a proofreader. The errors make it difficult to follow and enjoy the story, which is a shame since it looked like it had some potential.

- JT

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
cool story

please continue this story, it is good but needs more detail of her humiliation

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