All Comments on 'Forgive Me, Father, For I Have...'

by NickyFaulkes

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mBrowmBrowover 15 years ago
Fine Story!

Well done, imaginative and well-written!

mBrowmBrowover 15 years ago
Oops

But do look up the difference between discrete and discreet (which you meant).

And "Don't peak." ===> "Don't peek."

fiestycat86fiestycat86over 14 years ago
Indeed!?

this was actually really well written. I have really gotten to the point where firm breast,hips and thighs do nothing but annoy me, but your writing makes it a moot point. I wasn't so much seeing the typical bottle blonde bimbo, rather I was seeing a woman that could've have been myself, even though I am not athletically "firm" nor am I blonde. I loved the way you wrote out Marly and Charly as the, forgive me, "fake" girls while the focus remains on the woman in the habit. Truly it gave a flash back to the red headed nun in the Sister Act movies.

Well done. I think you have found your niche.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Help me Father

I need your cock in me ! Please cumm in me !!

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