All Comments on 'Forlorn Room 8'

Hot story, great desriptions, very sexy, but lacked intrigue.

Thank you for writing this story cindeelee. The atmosphere, the detail, everything, was wonderful. Having a, shall we say "shower fetish", I was beyond turned on by your characters. I will recommend your writing to all of the people I know who read literotica stories. I hope someday to see you in print!

I really liked this story; it aroused me appropriately. I liked all the details in the setting, the situation, the diner and the motel. I've been in places like that; you captured them very well. I got caught up in the tale and never saw the ending coming! Very well done!

Keep writing! Thanks!

Brendan (gene55m)

This is a good story; lots of details in the setting, the mood, the lonely desparation of the young woman. The diner and motel feel real; I've been in places like that (but never with such an encounter happening!). And the ending was an unexpected treat.

Your skill as a writer is promicing. Write more!

Thanks,

Brendan (gene55m)