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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Nicely written with a wonderful set up but it seems to end a little to abruptly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Amazing writing!

yes the ending was a little abrupt but the description was fantastic. Bravo!

serginhoserginhoover 11 years agoAuthor
Cheers!

Thanks for the feedback, folks. I'll make sure the next one climaxes more spectacularly!

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