All Comments on 'Francine'

This story seemed rushed and forced, take your time.

Okay, so a guy dealing with 4 years of celibacy manages to get a pretty girl, who smiles, and flirts and he proceeds to have a good night of sex and he never calls her. HEll even in fiction women would be pissed with that. I guess its alright, it fits the standard hook up lick up suck up #$%# up formula you see in a lot of these stories. Take your time, enjoy the illusion of characters. DOn't be afraid to go over one page.

Nice pickup, one night stand, story. However, having developed your characters in the first part, the ending seemed quite rushed, and emotionally cold.

Look at the situation you presented. A guy that's gone solo for four months feels quite horny, and simply takes what he wants without even giving his sex partner a decent goodbye. No wonder so many women are jaded by the dating scene.