All Comments on 'Frank and Tanya'

Another wife, another gangbang for Bob. At least this one had a decent ending.

No way would I have married that Cheating Slut . Without Trust can their be a happy Marriage ? I do not think so

You keep on repeating the same plot over and over in multiple stories with little variation.

I do like the hint of violence, this is how my mind works and I really do not understand people that say "I wouldn't hurt this or that". I would have no problem hurting either party involved in cheating, and I would have 0 problem hurting blackmailer. And if I would end up in jail I would live my life to get out and end the life of the one who put me in. I know a lot of guys like that and that is what amazes me - how little of them show up in these LW stories.

He is brain dead.She refuses even to date him for eight years ,yet when she is in trouble,he helps her instead of treating her like she treated him.Also did she make VP,inherit her millions and reconnect with her sister?.

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He's a glutton for punishment and he can't pick women for shit.

Again, damn good and orginal.

Anyone sane would immediately run from a pregnant woman who was gangbanged, but doesn't even know if it was rape.

Especially someone who clearly valued her career above everything.

WHY DID IT END SO SOON? IT WAS JUST GETTING INTERESTING! IT COULD HAVE GONE A LOT FARTHER TO ANSWER A LOT OF RAISED QUESTIONS. WILL TANYA'S AND FRANK'S FAMILY FIND OUT THE REAL STORY ABOUT THEIR MARRAGE OF CONVIENCE? `WILL TANYA'S SISTER COME BACK INTO THE FAMILY FOLD? HOW LONG DOES PARADISE LAST WITH FRANK AND TANYA? DOES TANYA MAKE V.P.? DO MORE PICTURES SURFACE AND DOES ANYONE GO TO JAIL OR WORSE? DOES OFFICE POLITICS COME INTO PLAY CONCERNNING THE RAPISTS? SEE, MANY QUESTIONS AND POSSIBILITIES FOR A BETTER STORY.

Definitely one of your better stories

Felt like an abrupt ending, it did a 180 in terms of story direction and then ended in a very unsatisfying way. Again I have to wonder why so many of your stories are LW when they barely have any LW or don't at all.

Pretty good story. Hard to believe a guy would do something like that. But then I’m a guy, and if the girl was hot enough….who knows? I liked the way they dealt with the blackmailer but I thought the story ended too abruptly. There should have been more, if only to let us readers know if they made it work. Or not.

A typical JPB story of justice... at least HIS version of it.

This 5-star tale DOES feel like it's Chapter 1...

...any more coming ?

Would have been more interesting if the baby turned out to be black !

A great 4 star story. Would be 5 stars 🌟 if there were more of an ending. It’s fun to read just what all was done to the bastard. I’m thinking that so many Literotica stories have the same outline because most authors have read many stories here and are consciously or unconsciously fitting into the same formula.

Bill S.

It was a pretty interesting story but damn man you need a continuation. Why the hell would you just stop the story before a satisfactory conclusion. If this how your stories end this the last one I read. Story could be a 5 but I gave it a 1 for being incomplete.

Unfinished...

Makings of a decent story until it ended abruptly.

I liked it. Nice job Pard.

The story up to this point is great. Now we just need an ending without which it's a 3.

Needs a proper ending.

JPB apparently doesn't know how to finish a story. Even a few additional paragraphs could do it.

It's a sad state of affairs when folks think they know a story better than the writer! Pathetic ! Thanks for the tale Bob, 5 stars

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