All Comments on 'Frankie (Female) Meets Randy'

Kinda read like a kids story with not a lot of rhythm to the story. But keep trying and I am sure you will get better the more you write. Thanks.

The story was enjoyable; the characters were delightful in a kind of quirky way. Those looking merely for raw eroticism and the mechanics of sex would be disappointed, The story, I think, could be improved by some romantic sex as an expression of love. Nevertheless, I believe that the author's work is superior to most. The Guy can write: I will be watching for new stories,

As usual, your humor and vocabulary give me a great read. Your stories are always a bit different and funny. Thank you for a fun time.

Well done!