All Comments on 'French Maid'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
1 star.

WTF?

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpetealmost 13 years ago
Perfect wife for the ...

....perfect teenage daydream.

ElectricBadgerElectricBadgeralmost 13 years ago
Nice Story

Enjoyed the story - simple and straight forward, well done technically, not really a believable tale but a cute fantasy sort of read and some very sexy situations. I think you could improve by adding some more characterization and tension, but that's small potatoes.. I don't get the "WTF" comment, I'm guessing they weren't into the cuckolding finish? Anyways, to counter them a bit, and 'cause this was a pretty good story, *****

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
That was nice!

A sweet, sexy story with a 'twist' we could see coming a mile away and it still made a good read!

Thank you - 4 *s.

ThomasLordThomasLordover 9 years ago
Got Me Going

This one got me turned on. Nice descriptive language and a hot fantasy story. Any guy not caught up in traditional morals would find this arrangement interesting, at least.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Married to a whore. Oh, yay!

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