by ExpDomM
Enjoyed the story - simple and straight forward, well done technically, not really a believable tale but a cute fantasy sort of read and some very sexy situations. I think you could improve by adding some more characterization and tension, but that's small potatoes.. I don't get the "WTF" comment, I'm guessing they weren't into the cuckolding finish? Anyways, to counter them a bit, and 'cause this was a pretty good story, *****
A sweet, sexy story with a 'twist' we could see coming a mile away and it still made a good read!
Thank you - 4 *s.
This one got me turned on. Nice descriptive language and a hot fantasy story. Any guy not caught up in traditional morals would find this arrangement interesting, at least.