All Comments on 'Fresh Fruit'

Hi, logophile

I liked your story a lot, and look forward to more submissions from you.

that was one of the hottest stories ive ever read. keep up the good work.(btw i did it twice to this one)

Great story! I looking foward to more from you.

Looking forward to more!

hot! Sensuous and honest. I very much related to both characters. Thanks for the great story!

Written as only a woman could! For your 1st submission it was awesome, do continue your writing style is excellent.

You are an artist, writer, lover of women, and food! Its so good as a first post, I have to believe you have written elsewhere before this. Keep them comming! -Lv

Excellent story loved it.

Fresh Fruit is one of the most exciting and sensual stories we have read! Logophile you have style.

My wife has reread Fresh Fruit several times and still comments on how wonderful it is.

Can't wait for more from logophile!

Should be required reading for anyone contemplating writing a lesbian story...remarkable!

I loved the way this was written: almost like a page from a diary of a woman who has just experienced something very special. Very hot, and very sensual. I will read it again!

(is this beach anywhere near Daytona?)

HOT HOT HOT. the only thing i would say is that, i want more. awesome job!

what happens the next day???

simply loved the context & style of your writing...can't wait for more of your stories...

Hot women and fruit! Your words painted, rather than told a story. Very good, very good indeed!

got any oranges? I can pretend...if you can ignore the beard that is *grin*

This was a really hot story, written like, I believe, a dirty story should be written

Amazing! It was so well written and so hot. I will be reading more of your work.

Thank you for writing sexy, sweet stories. The two I have read feel real and show caring partners. Please keep writing.

peek - to sneak a look at

peak - mountain top (n) or to come to the top of something (v)