by bill_p99
sam somehow became rob for awhile in the beginning of this chapter. :( unless kathy and beth swapped hubbies for awhile when i wasn't noticing.....
that's the sort of thing your editor should catch.
other than that, fabulous writing and you weave a great story. top notch characterization!
As an Anglophile who has a number of British friends, I find it depressing and disappointing that so many of the stories written by British authors feature slut wives and wimp or cuckold husbands. England is a wonderful nation. Why don't their writers represent this fact?
the Ct Yankee
Cheating exist in every aspect or our society. much of the disasters that befall the little working guy can be attributed to a dripping cunted cheater and some highly paid manager or CEO. We all pay for the cheater and it's time we should do something about it. I myself plan on exposing any evidence of cheating to the spouse regardless of the outcome. A cheater can be a man or a woman. Usually the woman is a wife and the man isn't much better than the wife that cheats. Sometimes he's innocent but most times it's some SOB that is so f8ucking alpha it's pitiful. He can't control his impulses He should be assinated with the slut wife cheater. I too am an alpha but I don't use my cock to be Alpha...I use my gun and muscle to destroy those that sully our lives with their dishonesty
In some cases, the cheaters [both female & male] deserve this type of malice. Time will tell on this one! We hope Rob does find out how much of a slut she is and finds a way to put her in the same cell as her previous fuck buddy.
spouse totally betrays themselves and their marriage while at the same time attempting to destroy and humiliate their spouse. Basically these people are mentally ill with a suicidal tendency wanting basically to destroy their own lives. If you want to fuck someone else outside of the marriage have the morals and decency to tell your spouse and to file for a divorce first. Failure to do so in my eyes means the other spouse is due an retribution they desire including destroying their cheating spouse and the other adulterer.
is also an accident, but friendly swinging is on purpose. TK U MLJ LV NV
Pointless to write so as to glorify i mpulsive, selfish, shallow, guiltless con- women, and then change at the end and try to moralize or clean them up. Not likely to happen. Thank goodness the poor dumb barnyard animal wasnt killed by that psycho
bill_p99
Sorry, but this tale was the epitome of the very worst in cuckoldry. All the characters, except perhaps poor old Rob, we're pretty two dimensional and we're portrayed with no redeeming qualities. I don't know what to make of Kate ' scene with the lunatic cheating wife killer. We're you attempting to provide some last minute moral lesson for your readers? If that was the case, you didn't pull it off. The sex scenes were pretty sordid and reminded me of what adolescent males would enjoy. And throughout All the sex, not one rubber was used...Christ only knows what STDs were being cultured. Sam was a willing cuck, but Rob was an unknowingly cuck. Think very carefully before creating your next submission, unless you enjoy reading negative feedback.
Good story series, Sam is a total loser, probably closet homo, Beth is a slut and needs to be divorced pronto, their friends are pond scum, but the tale was well told.