All Comments on 'Friendly Skies'

I enjoyed it, but you could have so much more with it.

That was hot, but so short! Expand expand expand...draw it out. There's nothing better than sex that is as hot as that, and drawn out. Other than that, I enjoyed it.

I loved it, especially when I read your other highly erotic submissions. I agree with the other commenters that this was a quick read, but frankly I enjoy a quick "read". If you can get me that wet, that quickly, you've got a pocket full of talent. Not to mention, your story fits quite nicely as a puzzle piece when I read your other stories like "Villa V" and "Villa VI". Please give us more.

Geronimo.

I thought this bit of erotica was just the right size. A great combination of exciting story telling with a lot of hot sex. The story of my life! (I wish.)

Again, why can't my flights be like this? In fact...why can't my spouse be like? Ahhh...time to go clean up. Fantastic read!

What happened for the rest of the weekend?

very hot story but a little hard to follow

I hope your characters get together a lot more. I, for one, would like to hear about the rest of the weekend.