All Comments on 'Friends Become Lovers'

Superb story, a slight sadness that made the story somewhat poignant, especially in the sex scenes, where she's flooded with his semen, it's a beautiful feeling your loving man's cum inside you

I used to glow somehow. in fact I still do.

regards Jem

Very hot and believable...I love their relationship. Great job.

Great and moving tale... one comment: in the position they were in... "Cherie saw his balls draw up tight and she drove her lips to the base of his cock, swirling her tongue around his manhood. His pubic hair covered her nose as she awaited the warm seed he was about to award her. as she awaited the warm seed he was about to award her." No hair here!

Another good story. Keep going.