All Comments on 'Friends Ch. 01'

THAT NO ONE, ESPECIALLY INTERESTED IN. sORRY BUT IT'S YOUR LIFE AND YOU HAD TO WRITE IT BUT WE ALL HAVE STORIES.

I didn't even read your story. Your introduction put me off completely.

Don't tell your reader that the story isn't true. Let the reader decide. They aren't all idiots, you know. Did Shakespeare or Dickens or Joyce or Rowling ever say, "By the way, before you read this, please note that it isn't true"?

You are posting a story on a porn site. Don't get so up yourself.

lawyer...well I'm not and i doubt that many readers of the site are so shut the fuck up..You write like one

Don't worry about some of the negatoids who must have miserable lives with nothing better to do than leave their silly comments. This is a good story so far and who cares if it is true or not. You show talent as a storyteller. Part of the reason for the 100 is because it deserves more than a 75.

you can't write a story. It seems you are not telling a story but writing about the area and people generally. No names, no introductions. Very bad experience.